Thursday, January 5, 2012

Thoughts and Ideas 3 - Solid Synopsis

Intro - Jules is on the phone
Intro to environment - messy apartment
Into to circumstance - what's on TV, dictorial program, mild interest
He's a mess, lives in a mess, and stuck in a situational mess

Regular guy with him, talking, showing some animosity, named Ziq

Jules is packing and picks up a watch, having his first flashback
He was late, never saw his mom, and by the time he was able to, he was too late

Jules instigates, "I won't want this anymore"
This "talk" becomes an argument
One involves,
a best friend - could be like a puppet for the
difference of opinion resulting him in joining the government police

a girl - kinda like Pepper Potts from "Iron Man" franchise
embraces him, then walks off "I don't wanna see you destory yourself"
"What a load of bullshit"
What kind of art was Jules doing that caused her to leave him?
(can she just say a line without "ruining" the story?)

He leaves his family,
He has a difference of opinion with friend
He is left by girlfriend because he's too absorbed in his work

(cutting back to memories, where Ziq emobodies the character and how they feel in conflict)

The pressure becomes too much, and Jules seems to 'snap'


Progression to a realization where Ziq is more of a "conscious" over a "doubt"

Jules performs a piece of "art" on parliament doors
3 news stations are on the scene
"At city hall, there has been an act of violence"
"At city hall, there has been a strange act of graffitti"
"At city hall, there has been an expression of art"

Either reveal of "graffitti" or not, depending on if we can think of a word or tag that can mean
something heavy with regards to our film

Spotlight on Jules, messy look, paint on him; he finished "tagging"
With police/soldiers all with aimed guns at Jules
He grins

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